ooh, so beautiful!!! I love the dreamy look in her eyes...

I think her face is done really well, the clothes looks a bit "flat", they lack of some contrast, to me... but I'm the one who is worse in painting clothes, so I can easily be wrong!

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A drop of colour saves me from the fate I'm facing everyday
~Hyde

Thank you! I thought about adding some textures to the clothes, but couldn't really think of which ones. Maybe that will help? Or adding more colors..?

This is really pretty, but I have three problems with it. One the lips are a bit off, her lower lip is too small (or smaller than her upper lip) so it gives the impression of an overbite. That can be corrected by making the lower lip fuller.

Also the bird's beak looks off, in real birds it splits all the way down the middle to a point just by his head. This bird looks like he is chirping through just half his beak.
Look to google for a good bird beak reference, they also have good drawing references for birds if you are not happy with his overall look.

Lastly the bird is pearched on the girl's shoulder. But when I look my shoulder to see something my head is turned much farther left or right than her's is.
Maybe draw the bird sitting on a branch instead? That way it will not look like her shoulders are at an unnatural angle to her body.

But this is such a great start, and it will be beautiful when you finish with it!

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"Find out what you love. Do it because you love it. Stick with it. Start now."
~ Barbara Sher

Thank you very much! I'll definitely consider how to use your advice.
I appreciate the time you took to view and help out.

Thank you!
You know if you work at it this will really be even more beautiful!
I am no good at painting, I wish I had half the talent you have!

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"Find out what you love. Do it because you love it. Stick with it. Start now."
~ Barbara Sher

so soft and cute - such a pretty face love the color shades

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If a vagina is art, so is a penis too.
If a woman's ass hole is art, so is a man's ass hole too.
If a woman's breasts is art, so is a man's chest too.
If tied up women is art, so are tied up men too.

Thank you. That's very kind.

I appreciate that.

This is very sweet and magic, the colors let it more and more magic and emotive! Very well worked, and seems so real!

I don't know... as I said, I'm the worst in painting clothes, so it's difficult for me to give you technical suggestions... I feels like it lack shadows and lights, but I can't really be sure of it!!
but it's already a wonderful work!

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A drop of colour saves me from the fate I'm facing everyday
~Hyde